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A neighbouring garden
With a few drops of water
Painted fresh-green
2007-05-13 13:19
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[The/ you know them exactly!] neighbouring garden -
With a few drops of water
fresh-green again [because painted might be the wrong tense?]
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do you agree?
regards
Heike Gewi
By hege
Posted 2007-10-22 12:39
Word "painted" is important - because it seemed quite unusual to obtain colour by using only water.
By Mateusz.Miśko
Posted 2007-10-22 21:09
We know it's "unusual" because you wrote so in the title of this haiku. haiku don't have titles, but - nature as an artist is using this "painting technique" usually. - regards Heike Gewi
By hege
Posted 2007-10-23 19:12
Yes - that's why the word "painted" is important here.
By Mateusz.Miśko
Posted 2007-10-24 09:46
sweet ;) ---- your thougts are going another direction. interesting indeed. [your are in my good books ;-) ___regards Heike Gewi]
By hege
Posted 2007-10-25 11:31
oh, my god!...full of mistakes...[thouhgts; an other; (?)] - but I stand by it ;-)
By hege
Posted 2007-11-30 15:23
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